Wednesday, October 22, 2014

Communicate 4.2.1 Feedback


Unit Title: Using Imagery in Creative Writing
Teacher: Ashley Rickard
Grade(s): 11th grade
Subjects:  Advanced Placement English Language and Composition
Setting:  Eastside High School is located in Newton County, Georgia. The rural school system is approximately 20 miles East of the city of Atlanta, and it is currently operating under Title I funding for the second consecutive year. Mrs. Rickard teaches 25 Advanced Placement English Language and Composition students in a typical classroom setting.
Learner Profile & Readiness: Of the 25 students in Mrs. Rickard’s  2nd period class, 9 of them are designated Gifted.  The other 16 students in the room have chosen to take this college-level course, with hopes of receiving college credit upon passing the National Exam. Two of the students in the room have Individual Education Plans in response to disabilities- one student is deaf, one student has autism. In both cases, extended time and printed directions are the main accommodations necessary for instruction and assessment.
Student Interest: These students are generally very mature learners. Most of them are quite involved in extracurricular activities, and some are also juggling the responsibilities of other AP courses. Two things that really motivate their learning are freedom of choice and online learning environments. Mrs. Rickard’s classroom operates in a way that encourages students to frequently choose their own writing topics, and her online assignments are frequent to accommodate the demanding schedule of her students.

Introduction
Performance Task Title: Using Imagery in Creative Writing
Performance Task Annotation: After studying imagery through American Literature, students will create their own piece of Creative Writing where they use imagery.
This Performance Task Template is differentiated for: This performance task is differentiated for Gifted learners, and it will meet the needs of the two students with IEPs.
Approximate Duration of Performance Task: One week. The assignment will take place primarily out of class to create a genuine virtual (distance) writing workshop.
Focus Standards: Georgia Common Core Performance Standards- English Language Arts
ELACCL11-12W3: Write narratives to develop real or imagined experiences or events using effective technique, well-chosen details, and well-structured event sequences.
a. Engage and orient the reader by setting out a problem, situation, or observation and its significance, establishing one or multiple point(s) of view, and introducing a narrator and/or characters; create a smooth progression of experiences or events.
b. Use narrative techniques, such as dialogue, pacing, description, reflection, and multiple plot lines, to develop experiences, events, and/or characters.
c. Use a variety of techniques to sequence events so that they build on one another to create a coherent whole and build toward a particular tone and outcome (e.g., a sense of mystery, suspense, growth, or resolution).
d. Use precise words and phrases, telling details, and sensory language to convey a vivid picture of the experiences, events, setting, and/or characters.
e. Provide a conclusion that follows from and reflects on what is experienced, observed, or resolved over the course of the narrative.
ELACCL11-12W4: Produce clear and coherent writing in which the development, organization, and style are appropriate to task, purpose, and audience.
ELACCL11-12W5: Develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, editing, rewriting, or trying a new approach, focusing on addressing what is most significant for a specific purpose and audience.
ELACCL11-12W6: Use technology, including the Internet, to produce, publish, and update individual or shared writing products in response to ongoing feedback, including new arguments or information.

Complementary Standards: Georgia Common Core College & Career Readiness Standards- Writing
CCW10: Write routinely over extended time frames (time for research, reflection, and revision) and shorter time frames (a single sitting or a day or two) for a range of tasks, purposes, and audiences.
Complementary Standards: Georgia Common Core College & Career Readiness Standards- Language
CCRL1: Demonstrate command of the conventions of Standard English grammar and usage when writing or speaking.
CCRL2: Demonstrate command of the conventions of Standard English capitalization, punctuation, and spelling when writing.
CCRL5: Demonstrate understanding of word relationships and nuances in word meanings.
CCRL6: Acquire and use accurately a range of general academic and domain-specific words and phrases sufficient for reading, writing, speaking, and listening at the college and career readiness level; demonstrate independence in gathering vocabulary knowledge when considering a word or phrase important to comprehension or expression.
National Standards: National Educational Technology Standards- for Students
1.       Creativity and Innovation- Students demonstrates creative thinking, construct knowledge, and develop innovative products and processes using technology. Students:
a.       Apply existing knowledge to generate new ideas, products, or processes
b.      Create original works as a means of personal or group expression
2.       Communication and Collaboration- Students use digital media and environments to communicate and work collaboratively, including at a distance, to support individual learning and contribute to the learning of others. Students:
a.       Interact, collaborate, and publish with peers, experts, or others employing a variety of digital environments and media.
b.      Communicate information and ideas effectively to multiple audiences using a variety of media and formats.
3.       Digital Citizenship- Students understand human, cultural, and societal issues related to technology and practice legal and ethical behavior. Students:
a.       Advocate and practice safe, legal, and responsible use of information and technology.
b.      Exhibit a positive attitude toward technology that supports collaboration, learning, and productivity.
c.       Demonstrate personal responsibility for lifelong learning.
d.      Exhibit leadership for digital citizenship.
4.       Technology Operations and Concepts- Students demonstrate a sound understanding of technology concepts, systems, and operations. Students:
a.       Understand and use technology systems.
b.      Select and use applications effectively and productively.
c.       Troubleshoot systems and applications.
d.      Transfer current knowledge to learning of new technologies.
Task and Assessment Procedures and Resources
Description and Teacher Directions
1.       The teacher will lead a class review of imagery in Creative Writing, using “To Build a Fire” by Jack London--  http://www.qcc.mass.edu/plafountaine/Jack%20London%20to%20build%20a%20fire.pdf (Be sure to a discussion of the following: plot, setting, point of view, organizational structure, purpose, audience, content focus, and linguistic strategies). 
2.       Explain to students that they will be employing imagery as they write their own piece of Creative Writing. They may choose whether they want their piece to be fiction or nonfiction, but the main focus of their piece needs to be imagery. Encourage students to follow the writing process:
o    brainstorm or take notes into MSWord
o    reorganize the brainstorming into a logical outline (plan)
o    then complete a draft from that outline
3.       As needed, provide mini-lessons during this task to review the main points of the complementary standards included above. 
4.       Students must type their completed piece in Microsoft Word.  Then, students will use Google Drive to upload their essays to their Google Drive account. Students will share their finished essay with the teacher electronically through the Google Drive share feature.
5.       The teacher will organize the submitted essays into one electronic Google Share Folder. Then, the teacher will grant all students electronic access to all submitted essays through making the newly created Share Folder available via a link that should be published on the class website.
6.       Students will use the comment feature of Google Drive to interact with one another in a Virtual Writer’s Workshop. Each student should offer feedback and suggestions for at least three peers.
7.       After receiving feedback, students should evaluate the feedback and suggestions from their peers. They should make any necessary adjustments to their piece and re-submit the completed, edited Creative Writing Essay.
8.       The teacher will use the Creative Writing Rubric to assess the overall finished product for this assignment.



Rationale of Samples
The following are excerpts from different Creative Writing essays written by some former students from 2010. Each essay is used with permission. The feedback provided via Microsoft Word illustrates the types of feedback that students will provide to their peers through the Google Virtual Writer’s Workshop. The feedback also represents the comments that the teacher may provide when grading the final product of each Creative piece via Google Drive.













No comments:

Post a Comment